Wednesday, April 19, 2017

The writers prompt challenge- TWPC 3




Allie, my story
has 328 words
has all three items in bold and italic
the piece of dialogue is in bold and italic
the acronym is in bold and italic
the picture is placed where I use it
I used both themes, but it might be a little hard to tell
I also continued my last story

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It was all a trick. A lie. The woman in the tower was lying. She did so to everyone, tricking them into believing that they were special, and offer them something they couldn’t resist. Mine was knowledge, and I fell for it. Then she wiped their minds and made them her slaves. But I escaped, and had fled, staying in the shadows, hiding, hiding from everyone. I couldn’t go home. All I could do was hide. Now I rested in an abandoned building, still recovering from the terror of this morning. I’d run into another group of her slaves, searching for me, and this time they’d had guns. Now as I sat there, I heard footsteps. Uh-oh. I thought. But before I could do anything, the door swung open, and a teenage boy walked in, starting when he saw me. I wrapped my cloak tighter around me and started to leave, but he said “Wait!” I stopped, and looked at him curiously. “Are you Estelle?” He asked. I slowly nodded. He nodded as well. “Good. now come with me.”
“Where are we going?”
“I’m taking you to join W.H.I.T.E. we’re a rebellion against The Lady.”
“Why?” I asked. He snorted.
“And you call this living? Wouldn’t you rather do something with your life?”
I raised an eyebrow. He sighed, and rolled up his sleeve. His death date was three years ago. I believed him then. I nodded and followed him out the door. He led me halfway across the city, and into a light gray building. We went to the back, and he got down on his knees and picked the lock on a door, while I studied a clock on the wall.

It had been a day since I had last eaten, and it was lunch time. My stomach grumbled. Then he took me down a hall and through another locked door. He held it open and said, “Welcome, Estelle, to the rebellion.”
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HA HA!! Cliff hanger again! They are insanely fun to write. 😆

The giveaway is coming up, so stay tuned! I also need to make Lea's birthday post, oh dear....
*tries to think of something new to happen and fails*

Have any suggestions? Or do you not mind stories about our dolls being boringly crazy?

Oh, and me and Ivy decided that in 10 years, when we're grown up, we're going to go to the star wars celebration when it celebrates 50 years of star wars, so it should be epic! 😃

Have an awesome day everyone!

toodles, from


Do like writing stories? Did you like my story?
Have any suggestions on how to make Lea's birthday unique?
Random question: What's your opinion of The hunger games?



4 comments:

  1. Josie says she misses Kit, Ruthie, Lea, and Elizabeth and she thinks Lea should have an outdoor birthday party

    Sending hugs,

    ~Kyra~ (and Josie)

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    1. awww, they miss Josie to. :) <3
      thats a good idea! thanks for your sugestion. :)

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  2. AMAZNG ENTRY!!!!! I LOVED it!!!!!!

    Allie Taylor

    PS PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

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